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Pitch Ready — screenplay · music video · commercial

CC BY 4.0 portable no API key

Pitch Ready — Script Finisher

Takes an existing screenplay or pilot script and builds it into a complete, pitch-ready package.

Five stages: coverage diagnosis → structure audit → logline → pitch documents → verbal pitch. Each stage must pass before the next opens. Fix before you package. Package before you pitch.


The problem

Most scripts never get pitched because they're never finished. Not unwritten — unpackaged. The writer has a draft. Maybe several. But no logline that works, no one-pager that earns the meeting, no understanding of what a development executive actually needs to see.

This skill closes that gap. It starts with the script you have and produces the exact materials the industry expects.


The five stages

Stage What it produces
1. Coverage diagnosis Six-criterion rubric — PASS/CONSIDER/RECOMMEND per criterion. Priority-ranked fix list.
2. Structure audit Page-by-page check against benchmarks for the script's format. Every broken benchmark identified.
3. Logline One or two sentences that make an executive want to read more. Formula, tests, ten failure modes.
4. Pitch documents One-pager, treatment, pitch deck, series bible — each defined exactly and built to spec.
5. Verbal pitch 2–3 minute structure. Six failure modes. Ready for the room.

What's in the repo

skills/script-finisher/
  SKILL.md                    the five stages and the discipline
  references/
    coverage-diagnostic.md    six-criterion coverage rubric
    structure-audit.md        act structure benchmarks by format
    logline-workshop.md       formula, tests, ten failure modes
    pitch-documents.md        every document in the package, exactly
    verbal-pitch.md           the 2–3 minute pitch structure
    sources.md                sources graded [INDUSTRY] / [PRACTITIONER]

Install

Claude Code

git clone https://github.com/Nagacash/Pitch-ready.git
mkdir -p ~/.claude/skills
cp -r Pitch-ready/skills/script-finisher ~/.claude/skills/

Hermes, Codex, Cursor, Cline or any agent that reads files

Paste SKILL.md into the system prompt. Load individual reference files when you need depth on a specific stage.

from pathlib import Path
from openai import OpenAI

skill = Path("skills/script-finisher/SKILL.md").read_text()
client = OpenAI(base_url="https://openrouter.ai/api/v1", api_key="...")
resp = client.chat.completions.create(
    model="nousresearch/hermes-4-70b",
    messages=[
        {"role": "system", "content": skill},
        {"role": "user", "content": "I have a rough feature script about a forensic accountant. Help me build the pitch package."},
    ],
)

What this skill is not

It does not write the script. It diagnoses, structures and packages one that already exists.

It does not guarantee a meeting or a sale. The concept and execution have to be there — which is why coverage diagnosis happens first.

It does not substitute for a manager or entertainment attorney. Note for AI-assisted work: WGA guidance requires disclosure when AI-generated material is used in a submission context.



Independent testing — Hermes 4 (on a real project)

Hermes 4 ran the skill against an actual short-form comedy series (30-episode vertical serial) — not a test scenario but a real project in development.

"It forced a format decision before packaging. That's the move a real development exec makes and most 'pitch' prompts skip."

"It caught the one gap a founder can't see from inside: NAGA is short-form-native, not a pilot PDF. A vanity pass would've called it done. This didn't."

"The reference files are real, specific, and industry-grounded (Netflix deck guidance, WGA disclosure note, the escalation override test). Not filler."

"The skill grades structure and format, not funny. It confirmed NAGA is well-built and packageable. It did not and cannot tell you the jokes land — that's a different tool. Honest engineering, not hype."

The test also found the one real gap: structure-audit tables are page-count based (feature, pilot, half-hour). The skill didn't have benchmarks for short-form vertical serials — 2–8 minute episodes in a 10–30 episode run. That format is now covered in references/structure-audit.md.

Result: the draft returned RECOMMEND with one actionable fix — collapse to a formatted pilot PDF. One script away from submission-ready.


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Licence

Documentation — CC BY 4.0. Attribution: Naga Codex (Maurice Holda) — https://github.com/Nagacash/Pitch-ready

Created by Naga Codex — Maurice Holda, Hamburg.

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Pitch-ready creative package for any screen format: screenplay, music video, or ad campaign. Four entry points, same standard.

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