updated to hypershift docs

Author: day0hero

content/patterns/hypershift/_index.adoc

@@ -33,44 +33,28 @@ include::modules/comm-attributes.adoc[]
 
 Background::
 
-This pattern simplifies the deployment of an {hcp} or hosted control plane cluster. Use this pattern to create hosted  control plane clusters.
+This pattern simplifies the deployment of an hosted control plane management cluster. Use this pattern to create hosted control plane clusters.
 
 Workflow::
 
 * Install multicluster engine for Kubernetes Operator
-* Create an instance of the `MultiClusterEngine` to enable `hypershift`, which is a link:https://access.redhat.com/support/offerings/techpreview[technology preview feature].
-* Install the AWS Controllers for Kubernetes - Amazon S3 Operator
+* Create an instance of the `MultiClusterEngine` to enable `hypershift`
 * Create an S3 bucket that hosted control plane will use for OpenID Connect (OIDC)
-* Create a buildconfig and imagestream that provide the HyperShift cli (`hypershift`) as an imagestream to be used in further automation if desired.
-
-//This pipeline is showcased link:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zja83FVsm14[in this video].
 
 image::hypershift/hypershift-high-level-architecture.png[link="/images/hypershift/hypershift-high-level-architecture.png",title="source: https://hypershift-docs.netlify.app/", align="center"]
 
 [NOTE]
 ====
-If you have any questions or concerns contact mailto:[email protected][Jonny Rickard].
+If you have any questions or concerns about this pattern contact mailto:[email protected][Jonny Rickard].
 ====
 
 [id="about-solution-hcp"]
 == About the solution elements
 
-The solution enables the rapid provisioning of {hcp}.
+The solution enables the rapid provisioning of the {hcp} feature add-on.
 
 The {hcp-pattern} uses the following products and technologies:
 
 * {rh-ocp} for container orchestration
-* {rh-gitops}, a GitOps continuous delivery (CD) solution
-* The {rh-mce} Operator, the multicluster-engine provider
-* {ack-s3-op}, an S3 storage controller
-
-// All commented out by jrickard
-//== Recorded demo
-
-//link:/videos/xray-deployment.svg[image:/videos/xray-deployment.svg[Demo\]]
-
-//[id="next-steps_med-diag-index"]
-//== Next steps
-
-//* Getting started link:getting-started[Deploy the Pattern]
-//We have relevant links on the patterns page
+* {rh-gitops}: a GitOps continuous delivery (CD) solution
+* The {rh-mce} Operator: the multicluster-engine provider