https://github.com/owncloud/example-files/blob/master/Learn%20more%20about%20ownCloud/Data%20Protection%20and%20Data%20Secrecy%20in%20ownCloud.pdf
page 2: "admi-nistrators" (random hyphen)
https://github.com/owncloud/example-files/blob/master/Learn%20more%20about%20ownCloud/Introducing%20ownCloud.pdf
page 2: "We are an official ownCloud partner" - that sentence seems strange in the context of a document that is publish with the regular ownCloud release. Someone installing ownCloud themselves from the release tarball is not likely to have or be "an official ownCloud partner".
page 3: "we as a partner" - similar issue - the document has been written as if it is to be published by partners.
page 3: "Google Drtive" (typo)
https://github.com/owncloud/example-files/blob/master/Learn%20more%20about%20ownCloud/Keep%20your%20files%20safe%20with%20ownCloud.pdf
page 2: "exluding"
page 3: "..., if critical data is contained" - I am not sure what this means in the context of the sentence.
page 4: "Ransomware Protection blocks malware from encrypting files and folders" - actually the Ransomware Protection app provides a way to recover from a ransomware attack by allowing controlled recovery of files back to a previous point in time. IMO the text needs updating.
https://github.com/owncloud/example-files/blob/master/Learn%20more%20about%20ownCloud/Share%20files%20efficiently%20in%20your%20company.pdf
page 3, bottom right - "cloud means less control over the storage/..." to the next page - a repeated chunk of text.
page 4: "are saved in data/[user]/versions" - that is not quite technically accurate. But, IMO, this document does not even need to try to specify such technical backend implementation.
And it would be good for some to generally review the wording of the documents.
https://github.com/owncloud/example-files/blob/master/Learn%20more%20about%20ownCloud/Data%20Protection%20and%20Data%20Secrecy%20in%20ownCloud.pdf
page 2: "admi-nistrators" (random hyphen)
https://github.com/owncloud/example-files/blob/master/Learn%20more%20about%20ownCloud/Introducing%20ownCloud.pdf
page 2: "We are an official ownCloud partner" - that sentence seems strange in the context of a document that is publish with the regular ownCloud release. Someone installing ownCloud themselves from the release tarball is not likely to have or be "an official ownCloud partner".
page 3: "we as a partner" - similar issue - the document has been written as if it is to be published by partners.
page 3: "Google Drtive" (typo)
https://github.com/owncloud/example-files/blob/master/Learn%20more%20about%20ownCloud/Keep%20your%20files%20safe%20with%20ownCloud.pdf
page 2: "exluding"
page 3: "..., if critical data is contained" - I am not sure what this means in the context of the sentence.
page 4: "Ransomware Protection blocks malware from encrypting files and folders" - actually the Ransomware Protection app provides a way to recover from a ransomware attack by allowing controlled recovery of files back to a previous point in time. IMO the text needs updating.
https://github.com/owncloud/example-files/blob/master/Learn%20more%20about%20ownCloud/Share%20files%20efficiently%20in%20your%20company.pdf
page 3, bottom right - "cloud means less control over the storage/..." to the next page - a repeated chunk of text.
page 4: "are saved in data/[user]/versions" - that is not quite technically accurate. But, IMO, this document does not even need to try to specify such technical backend implementation.
And it would be good for some to generally review the wording of the documents.