Update gabbys-guide-to-cold-emailing-when-we-werent-even-hiring.mdx

Author: sonnynomnom

blogs/2026/gabbys-guide-to-cold-emailing-when-we-werent-even-hiring.mdx

@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ Also, it feels clickbaity. I love being clickbaity.
 
 I know you’ll feel inclined to write a lot in this part in hopes of selling yourself, but it’s best to keep this part to literally *one sentence*. Who you are, what you do, where you are at, the stage of your life you’re currently at, and what you specifically work on. Instant credibility.
 
-Additionally, if you’ve met them in some capacity previously, make sure to make a callback to that interaction. It’ll let them know you’ve been invested in them for some time, and are actually interested. Alternatively, if you were intro'ed to the company through someone who knows the team well, you can reference them in your email – that mutual can put in a good word if asked about you!
+Additionally, if you’ve met them in some capacity previously, make a callback to that interaction. It’ll let them know you’ve been invested in them for some time, and are actually interested. Or, if you were intro'ed through someone who knows the team well, you can reference them in your email – that mutual can vouch for you if asked!
 
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