Updated version of Day 1,2, and 3 blog

Author: nobody-particular

docs/news/botswana_2025/2025_botswana_blog.md

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 ## Days 1, 2, and 3 (7/13 - 7/15)
 
-We all arrived at the airport with enough time to check bags, get through security without issue, and grabbed some overpriced airport food. When we finally got sat on the plane we had to settle in for a long (15 hours) flight.
+We all arrived at the airport with enough time to check bags, get through security without issue, and grabbed some overpriced airport food. When we finally sat down on the plane we had to settle in for a long (15 hours) flight.
 
 ![Group photo in the airport](botswana_images/Airport.jpg)
 
-The first flight lasted over 15 hours, and we were very tired by the time we got to Doha, 24 hours later. We were lucky enough to have a long enough layover before our next flight to get hotel rooms. We stayed for about 6 hours at the Garden Hotel — getting some much needed, if short sleep — and got up at midnight to catch our next flight to Johannesburg.
+The first flight lasted over 15 hours, and we were very tired by the time we got to Doha, 24 hours later. We were lucky enough to have a long enough layover before our next flight to get hotel rooms for a quick rest. We stayed for about 6 hours at the Garden Hotel inside the Doha airport — getting some much needed, if short sleep — and got up at midnight to catch our next flight to Johannesburg.
 
 ![Row 16 on our first flight](botswana_images/Airplane.jpg)
 
-We are currently writing this from the Johannesburg OR Tambo International Airport in South Africa, after an 8 hour flight from Doha. Hanging out in the terminal with us are pigeons.
+We are currently writing this from the Johannesburg OR Tambo International Airport in South Africa, after an 8 hour flight from Doha. Hanging out in the terminal with us are pigeons. We aren't sure how they got here, but we appreciate the company.
 
 ![Pigeons in the Johannesburg OR Tambo International Airport](botswana_images/Pigeons.jpg)
 
-We still have approximately one hour left of flying before we Gabarone. We plan to stay up until 9:00 PM in order to combat jet lag.
+We still have approximately one hour left of flying before we get to Gabarone. Exhausted but excited, we hope to stay up until 9:00 PM in order to combat jet lag and get our selves set up better for the next two weeks.